26/02/2015

Yorkshire Tea: Presentation Board Peer Review 1

Today we had our first peer review for Studio Brief 2. Hollie was unable to make it in today, so I presented the boards by myself. I felt my verbal presentation of the boards improved on past Responsive presentations, with my wording being precise, informed and effective in explained where we planned to go with the project.


Our work was pretty well received, however there were varying viewpoints on different areas, it'll be up to Hollie and me to decided which advice is worth taking into account during the next phase of our development. Sophie W suggested a radical redesign of the Whippet mascot, whilst others said it worked pretty well. Zatul meanwhile informed up that some Muslims may be offended by the depiction a dog as it is considered a sacred animal to some. This was an interesting point, we never considered our work could offend someone so unintentionally and it is something Hollie and I will have to discuss further at some point.

Whilst both of these points were disheartening, the others of the group I presented to said that the work thus far was very effective and simply needed more development.

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