A Book of...: Crit Session

Today we had a crit session in the studio where we presented the work we had produced thus far.

I was quite happy with the responses I received, with both reviewers noting my large exploration of media which is something I wanted to improve upon after completing OUIL403. However, it was pointed out that I need to make the content 100% clear, which is something I was concerned about. The imagery works well, but with just visuals alone the reader will think its just a book about pigeons in a modern urban area. I think a minimal amount of informative text to explain the past of pigeons would benefit the book, as I had originally planned to do.

Furthermore whilst discussing my work afterwords, Joe praised my choice of brush pen to create my line work and said it was definitely the right choice.

(My own criticisms of my work) 

(Abby and Joe S.'s crits of my work)